A Class Introduction
Put your "Here I Am" introduction here before next Wednesday's class. I will provide you with my second sample as the first comment.
A place for English 12 students from the Pearson Adult Learning Centre in New Westminster, BC, Canada to read work in progress, critique, and ask or answer questions (of other students and of the teacher).
Put your "Here I Am" introduction here before next Wednesday's class. I will provide you with my second sample as the first comment.
Posted by Brad at 2/05/2010 02:59:00 PM
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Here's another version that introduces me using the same structure. Note how it follows my original but provides different details.
Love gazing at the night sky on Denman Island, collecting oysters at low tide, speeding on a bike down a mountain road (all the while hoping not to hit a small stone), chatting with my wife in the evening, the feeling you get when the Canucks score an overtime goal.
Loved my time in university, but haven’t considered going back. Loved my little kids, but they’ve grown up and moved away.
Look at life as a series of adventures; know that chances come one at a time.
--87 words
Here I am;
Love waking up to the aroma of freshly brewed coffee in the morning, listening to the hypnotic sound of rain drops falling outside my window, racing down a mountain on my snowboard (a rush of adrenaline fills my body), the contentment i feel when i see my beautiful kitty and hear her purr.
Loved my first boyfriend, but now we never talk. Loved my baby blanket, but now its torn and tattered.
Look at life choices as being a fork in the road. There are 2 paths one can take. The temptation road or the reality road.
Here I am;
Love slurping a freshly squeezed mango peach shake on a sweaty Summer, playing the organ with a flute and cello presets, shooting fruitloops(while watching Spongebob Squarepants), video chatting with my friends at midnight, the feeling you get when you see George Clooney.
Loved catching bullfrogs, but never tried again when got itchy. Loved being a toddler, but now, I'm a teenager.
Look at life as an ice cream; it is sweet but it melts.
--75 words
Here I am;
Love eating king crabs in downtown Anchorage, listening to the cracks of the bluish glacier on the cruise ship, staring at the black and white raccoon’s furtive trespass in the moonlight, ruffling my dog’s soft ears with the afternoon sunshine on my shoulders, observing my son writing a story with bunched strokes and silence before his computer, the feeling you get when your smiles winkle up your face.
Loved roller-coaster but never ride it anymore. Loved the daring dresses but never give it a try.
Look at my life as the setting sun; it is getting dim and slow, but still with that golden glow.
Here I am;
Love trying exotic recipes even though my daughter prefers plain bread, driving from coast to coast to find the perfect spot to call home, climbing Rocky Mountains (while looking over my shoulder for black bears), chatting with my overseas friends in the middle of the night, the feeling you get when you are in the hustle and bustle of city life.
Loved my toddler walking wobbly but now she is walking away from me. Loved my kittens climbing along my legs and sitting on my head, but now they are too fat.
Look at me in the middle of my life; see it now with patience which I suddenly find on my mind.
Here I am;
Love going to the theatre during the weekend, sitting at a park, reading romantic novels (while walking through the park), chatting with my friends on face book before I go to bed, the feeling you get when everyone says I miss you.
Loved to lay on my mother’s chest, but now she lives far away from me. Loved to play soccer, but our team was suspended.
Look at life how years run faster; I can’t believe that I’m already at twenties of age.
86 words.
Love smelling cherry blossoms still buds embellishing all the twigs, picking up a lotus with dew drops, rustling along a path full of falling brown leaves( while chatting with my family or friends), meditating beside the window over a cup of tea, the feeling you get when the surrounding mountains covered with snow as one in a warm home.
Loved learning English but never speak fluently. Loved talking in Chinese, and always hope for.
Look at life in and out of season; see it now with my mind wide open.
(90 words)
Here I am;
Love eating a caramel chocolate bar on a freezing day, lying at night in my comfy bed listening to the tapping rain on the window, working out in the gym (while listening to a songs full of memories),chatting with my son over dinner, the feeling you get when you see a stranger you think you know.
Loved the time I spent in my country, but haven’t considered going back. Loved my grandmother, but she passed away in a hurry.
Look at life and the childhood I lived; I can’t believe I am a mother now.
__97 words
Here I am;
Love cruising down the highway on a Summer's day, being with friends and feeling like the world is in our hands, going down the slope on my snowboard (all the while trying to keep my balance), playing basketball at Moody Park, the feeling you get when you score the winning basket.
Loved sleeping in but now I have class. Loved hanging out with my sister but now we've grown apart.
Look at life like a game of chess; choose the right desicion and make your move.
-89 words
Love preparing a special breakfast sunday morning,colleting a bunch of mint from my balcony,smelling the jasmin candle(while lisening to the 9:30's news),playing playstation role in the evening with my lovely husband,the feeling you get when the satisfaction arrived to you after a long day.
loved buying candies from my school's canteen but It'll not happen again,loved all moments I have lived in my parents' home,but now they are far.
Look at life as an open book,each page contains an experience of our living in this world.
-93 words
Love being far away from the smoky concrete forest, carrying my snowboard up to the top, navigating my unsure future, screaming out loud freely, resting period to period, absorbing anion while enjoying the panorama, the feeling you get when you get up from the snow.
Loved my delicate ten little companies but seldom to use them in my favorite way anymore. Loved the past fearless me but she had been buried in the deep deep grave.
Look at life it reflects a mother's shape; now life is for my children other than for me.
Love keeping the glamorous minutes in the wooden frames forever, looking at blinking stars at midnight until go to sleep, listening to pacific ocean ‘ waves (while sun show off her beams ),speeding on racing car , the feeling you get when touching a baby s’ hands.
Loved to play violin for my amorous mom on the mother ‘day but never do it. Loved to repeat my teen’s time, but it’s not possible.
Look at life is beautiful garden at the beginning of spring, but where are the flowers at the end of autumn? Enjoy your spring time life.
love taking spicy tea a rainy day, looking outside at dew drops reaching a hand outside to feel the rain ( afraid of getting my cloths wet) chatting with my mother on the phone ,the feeling you get when she says I miss you.
Loved my time in elementary school, but haven’t considered going back, loved my little siblings but they are parents now
Look at life as a river; know that life is going on
Love the smell of fresh rain on the warm sidewalk in summer, endless adventures with breathtaking sights and memories, laying in warm summer night grass (while studying beautiful stars), spending the day with friends on the beach, coming back from a long mountain hike covered head to toe in mud.
Loved someone once, but that didn’t work out. Loved irresponsibility, but I have a future to think about now.
Look at life as an amazing opportunity; we shouldn’t waste a minute of it.
-83
Loving reading novels at night, taking a walk on the street, playing with sons at the park, eating different food in the restaurant, chatting with friends through the Skype after midnight, smelling the fresh air under the trees, enjoying the feeling when the wife saw me with full of loving.
Loved to play badminton, but energy isn’t enough. Loved to play valley ball, but skill haven’t been improved since high school. Loved to share emotions with my best friends, but none of the best friends lives in Canada.
Looked at the imagine from a mirror; I can’t believe I am the man whose hair is white.
Here I Am
Love dreaming a dream at midsummer night, gazing at the stars on the miraculous space, wandering through the galaxy (all the while hoping not to disturb the Cowherd and the Weaving Girl), enjoying a cup of tea, the feeling you get when fogs come out from sea.
Loved my finger holding a cigarette, but never take it anymore. Loved my daughter, but she is a juvenile freak now.
Look at life as the waves over the ocean, know that it will come and go.
-- 87 words
Love the thrill and excitement of speeding down a long endless road, the feeling of lifting a weight that I once thought was impossible, sinking the eight ball in on my first shot (making sure that the white ball doesn’t follow), watching movies with my girlfriend on a rainy day, the feeling you get when you achieved a once unattainable goal.
Loved watching Saturday morning cartoons, but I’ve grown up. Loved my BMW, but now it’s in better hands.
Look at life as a test, learning new things and fixing mistakes you have made.
--97 words
Here I am;
Love eating my traditional foods, walking with the best friend in a rainy day, chatting with my littlie sisters during weekends, dreaming of impossible like working as a doctor in Canada, the feeling you get when your plane is landing on to your hometown.
Loved my country, but never returned there. Loved my family, but am living far away from them.
Look at life it seemed it will last forever; now it seems like just a short period.
81 words
Here I am;
Love sitting on the warm beach on a summer day, watching the sun go down, night time drives around Vancouver, looking for new places to eat or hang out, having a glass of wine with the company of great friends, watching 1960s movies with the family after dinner, the feeling you get when your first place in a 100m dash final.
Loved writing in my journal but seldom write in it anymore. Loved wearing my hair in a pony-tail everyday but now prefer to let my hair down.
Look at life as an obstacle; where I am hurdling and overcoming challenges that will bring me closer to my successes.
--112 words
Here I am;
Love planting tulips in the early winter, walking through the forest trail as the maple leaf begins to fall, playing with my cat over a long tickler, listening the peaceful music before the bed time, the feeling you get when you stand in the centre of the universe.
Loved to surf the Internet all night long but sometimes get drowned. Loved to play the piano but never gave it a try.
Look at life through a kaleidoscope; it is full of beauty, wisdom, colour, hope, and love.
--90 words
Here I am;
Love waking on the icy lake in the very early morning, only listening to the sound of a anonymous bird flap its wings above my head, dashing down a hill on my toboggan, the proud I feel when I get through those curves along the downhill way.
Love my first boyfriend, but now we never talk.
Love my beautiful shape, but now it is deformed and obese.
Look at my life as being a two-way street. There are 2 preferences I can follow. The energetic but exhausted way or relaxed and joyful way.
From Noela:
Love to wine and dine with family,working through this path of life, trying to find myself looking at my daughter like the eye of an angel, knowing that life without her I'd be incomplete; I'd never feel this inner peace, i couldn't be content.
Love the fact that she accept me as i am, even when my quirks comeout, she thinks they're cute.
Love facing challenges by day, knowing that my life on the line to do, not just try cause to me life is a natural high.
Here I am;
Love listen music, and turn the volume loudly;
Love watching TV, and interested in UFO program;
Love to cook but usually the taste dependent on my mood;
Love to climb the mountains but don’t have the time and energy;
Love to walk around the park, lie on the grass, and gaze at the stars in the sky,
Dream dreams to become a professional painter but never and never to do it.
Life is like a picture, and I want it to be a beautiful, brilliant, and perfect one;
But I doubt that I couldn't get all the colors to build it. Nevertheless, I will put all the colors I have.
Love to start my day with the aroma of my first brew mingling with the scent of the morning dew, spend idylic day reading book, doing crafts if my hands get itchy or feeling bored, fixing my car during a sunny day, a feeling of satisfaction of a well spent day.
Love to do art installation, but I have no space. Expressing love for my children through my experimental menu.
Nothing is permanent in life except changes; undergo one at a time.
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