Friday, December 9, 2011

Writing a List Poem

Beginning with "Life is the only way", write your own list poem using "A Note" as a model. Your poem must use the same number of words and structure as Szymborska's. 


Post a copy of your poem to the blog before coming to Wednesday's class. 


Be prepared to do a recital of your poem (please practice ahead of time!) and give some short remarks on the process you followed and any difficulties you experienced.

24 comments:

  1. A Note to Nobody

    Life is the only way
    to be buried in clouds,
    put your aid in the hand,
    sink in deeps;

    to be a sage,
    or touch his shine brain;

    to have sense
    from everything it's not;

    to slide across the roads,
    draft on maps,
    to seek the least of all future dangers.

    An extraordinary chance
    to forget for a moment
    girl’s happy smile
    with a man kissed her;

    and if only once
    to see a lucky number,
    end up exchanged by one worse or another,

    mislay your trust in the mud;
    and to capture a smell behind your silhouette;
    and to keep on not thinking
    something important.

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  2. A Note to You
    Life is the only way
    to smell of cold winter air,
    hold your breath under the snow,
    fly over mountains;

    to be a seagull,
    or enjoy its lovely song;

    to tell solitude
    but never lose hope;

    to hold a lover,
    savour a perfume,
    to seek happiness and sadness we could share.

    A solemn moment
    to remember once again
    a victory sound
    with the hands clapping loud;

    and if only once
    to climb on a peak,
    end up sunk in one depression or another,

    drop your dream in the fog;
    and to remember a hug from someone you love;
    and to keep on not realizing
    something important.

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  3. A Note to Loved Ones:

    Life is the only way
    to be loved by someone,
    held in hands on the streets,
    rise on emotions;

    To be a bird
    or fly to its nest;

    To tell love
    from nothing it’s not;

    to squeeze hands,
    look into a heart,
    to seek the least of all impossible love.

    A special reminiscence
    to look for a moment
    a conversation held
    with only looking at each others’ eyes;

    and if only once
    to hug someone by loved one,
    end up hugging one another,

    mislay your feelings in somewhere;
    and to follow hearts on surface with your brain;
    and to keep on not knowing
    something lovable.

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  4. A Simple Note

    Life is the only way
    to awake from shadows,
    thank life for breathing,
    spin in the morning thoughts;

    to be a fairy,
    or play the flute in the forest surrounded by nature beings;

    to wait for the absent lover
    it is not lasting forever;

    to reach unthinkable dreams,
    be messengers of peace,
    to seek the least of all possible wars.

    In a hollowed moment
    dwell heart and mind in a heavenly scenery
    to wash sins day by day
    accepting others, forgiving myself;

    and if only once
    to fall into the tunnel,
    end up looking for the light at the end,

    afraid of being alone in darkness;
    and to depart on a star enfolded in holy light;
    and to stop the time realizing
    death is redemption for life

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  5. A Note to Everyone

    Life is the only way
    to see sun on snow,
    catch a glimpse of The Lions,
    breathe out fog;

    to be unaware,
    or believe in smart lies;

    to define different
    as everyone who is;

    to agonize over things,
    stroll by yourself,
    to seek the best in life every day.

    An extraordinary moment
    to remember a first love
    and feel again
    your true heart lightly dancing;

    and if only once
    to stumble upon new ideas,
    end up convinced by some plan or another,

    embrace your life here on earth;
    and to follow the truth like a spark on the wind;
    and to keep on believing in
    something human.


    —Brad Hyde; November 2011

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  6. A Note to Myself

    Life is the only way
    to get soaked in water,
    hold you breath on the splash,
    gasp on air;

    to be a survivor,
    stroke stronger than the waves;

    to tell opponents
    winner takes it all;

    to save a friend,
    hold under arm,
    to post a defense in a tight circumstance.

    an extraordinary scene
    to taste for a minute
    the first strike
    of a classic swimming race;

    and if only once
    to crash on the sand,
    only to rise again and charge head-on,

    lick your wounds for a moment;
    and mount your offense loaded with force and piercing eyes;
    keep the pace fast and decisive
    until victory.

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  7. Note to Myself

    Life is the only way
    to dance in the rain,
    chase falling leaves in the wind,
    smile at sunshine;

    to be a knight,
    or show dignity with his sword;

    to tell hope
    from everything it’s not;

    to hug your family,
    kiss on cheeks,
    to seek the best consolation of all possibilities.

    An extraordinary time
    to remember for a moment
    a solemn vow committed
    with two hands held together;

    and if only once
    to step into the wild,
    end up tore by one trap or another;

    miss the birthday of your child;
    and to purchase the gift in his wish with all regrets;
    and to keep on not knowing
    something important.

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  8. Life is the only way
    to get adventure in journey,
    catch your courage on the seas,
    rise on waves;

    to be a sailor,
    or sail its solid sailboat;

    to tell story
    from someone who is not;

    to keep quiet emotion,
    contemplate in alienation,
    to seek the least of the best expression.

    an extraordinary mind
    to remember for an instant
    a respiration held
    with the fear of death;

    and if only once
    to slide upon a wave,
    end up entrapped in one whirlpool or another,

    mislay your goal in the rain;
    and to see a light on the sky with your eyes;
    and to keep on not disappointing
    something important.

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  9. A Note For Ever

    Life is the only way
    to smell the freshness of the lawn,
    follow your heartbeat in silence,
    walk on fog;

    to be a human,
    or kill for his empty benefits;

    to tell everybody
    the secret that they knew already;

    to feel a warm breath,
    under the rain or dearth,
    to seek the least of all possible affection.

    A particular time
    to learn by heart for a moment
    the first sentence of love you exchanged
    with the one you adore;

    and if only once
    to fall into a dim delusion,
    end up soaked in a confusing dream,

    mislay your goal in the end;
    and to witness your mistake;
    and to keep on not comprehending
    something significant.

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  10. Life is the only way
    to breathe in freedom,
    listen to your heart beat,
    and trust yourself;


    to be a dove,
    or be a symbol of freedom;


    to tell someone
    advice that he or she never minds;


    to accept the life,
    the way it is,
    to seek the best and happiness every minute.


    An extraordinary opportunity
    to remember once again the old
    memories it doesn’t
    matter bad one or good one;


    and if only once
    To fall into trouble,
    end up with a solution or a big smile,


    lose the destination of your life;
    and to remember a kiss from your loved one;
    and to continue on not realizing
    any disappointment.

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  11. A note to myself

    Life is happening only once
    Let it coming as a bounce
    Catch your breath and fly
    It happens only once

    To be a man
    The way you have to be;

    To have everyone
    The way they suppose to be;

    To squeeze inside all hearts
    All devils out
    To get the best of all possible arts

    No mistakes given a chance
    To dream for a moment
    A perfection held
    With the hearts opened up

    And if only once
    These all were true
    Ended up soaked in a haven or another,

    Mislay all your cries
    And to follow a shooting star with your sparkling eyes
    And to get perfectly knowing
    If these all were bestowing

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  12. A Note of Life


    Life is the only way
    to explore full moon nights,
    open your hands toward the sun,
    rise on waves;

    to be a chameleon,
    or adore its diverse colors;

    to tell betrayal
    from everything it’s not;

    to hug a friend,
    chat about anything,
    to seek the least of all our disagreements.

    An extraordinary reason
    to remember for a moment
    the first kiss
    from someone special to you;

    and if only once
    to fall from a swing,
    end up wounded by one tumble or another,

    mislay your photos in the attic;
    and to remember tender words whispered to your ear;
    and to keep on not feeling
    something irresistible.

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  13. A Note

    Life is the only way
    to get buried in snow,
    seize your breath on the grass,
    breakthrough the ice;

    to be a bird,
    or caress its smooth feathers;

    to see light
    from the blundering darkness;

    to cherish simple moments.
    observe the scene,
    to minimize the most of all conceivable errors;

    a unique chance
    to recall for a minute
    an experience shared
    with the lights switched off;

    and if only once
    to trip upon a root,
    end up falling from one step after another,

    throw your map to the wind;
    and to follow your instinct you feel within with a conviction,
    and to keep being unfamiliar to
    every event.

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  14. Life is the only way
    To sing in the shower
    Wake up to the sound of birds singing.
    Escape into the sea,
    to be silent in a crowd.
    Or stand alone on cold feet.
    To tell a story that has a sweet ending.
    Drinking lemonade while soaking in the sun,
    To let go of your misery and fearful thoughts:
    An extraordinary way to be told that life is not about the precious gifts, and only once to be struck by lightening
    Lay your head onto field of hay
    Watch the stars sparkle next to the moon
    And to follow a narrow tunnel
    Not knowing where it will take you.

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  15. Life is the only way
    To see yourself through others,
    To help you through hard times,
    Knowing lights ahead;

    To be a daughter,
    Or a mother’s gender partner;

    To tell a lover
    Those three sweet words;

    To be true friend,
    Without any secret,
    To say only what you mean and mean what you say.

    An extraordinary achievement
    To recall in a flash
    The first kiss
    You had under the bleachers;

    And if only once
    To settle for less,
    End up losing sight of your goal one way or another,

    Lose control of your life;
    And to dwell on the past, while living the present;
    And to keep complaining instead of making
    Things better.

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  16. “Life is the only way.”
    Life is the only way
    to learn though hard times,
    can’t undo any poor choices back,
    show love perfection;

    to be a king,
    or man challenge your believes;

    to speak dream
    from universe is not;

    to fall in love
    express ideas freely,
    to explore deep to find a sparks.

    A memorable moment
    to treasure glow of diamond
    path of creatures
    with beauty of your own;

    and if only once
    to proceed hesitation in life,
    end up new step head or another,

    mislay your thoughts to unforgettable notebook;
    and to see sunshine thru hard life of a mother nature;
    and to maintain on not knowing
    the overcome.

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  17. A Kind Note

    Life is the only way
    to get wrapped in knowledge,
    catch your dreams in your hands,
    rise on top;

    to be a nurse,
    or care for the sick;

    to tell truth
    behind all it's lies;

    to run with intuition,
    hopeful in decisions,
    to seek an answer and save a life.

    An extraordinary experience
    to remember a good deed
    a hand held
    with worries frozen in time;

    and if only once
    to stumble upon a needle,
    end up awoken by one patient or another,

    mislay your pain in the past;
    and to follow a light given by the angels in sight;
    and to keep always faithful in
    something cherished.

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  18. Life is the only way
    to have throbs in heart,
    hug dear person in silence,
    response with honest smile;

    to be a bird,
    or fly far away;

    to tell someone
    secret you never told before;

    to kiss a child,
    hear a funny stories,
    to seek the most innocent voice ever;

    An extraordinary time
    to remember again
    the warm house
    full of joy and love;

    and if only once
    to see some sign,
    end up followed by one step or another,

    mislay your pain in the sea of waves;
    and follow the Milky Way along;
    and to keep on seeking
    something impossible.

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  19. A note to the future..


    Life is the only way
    To be a brave person
    To love the person you marry
    Enjoy the journey

    To maintain your similarities
    And to respect the differences

    To be strong
    Even when everything’s wrong

    To keep them close
    Even miles away
    To seek the pleasure of being two as one

    In bad times
    To remember their first smile
    One gentle look
    You’ve been given, which you loved

    Even through tough times
    When mistakes were made
    End up learning that marriage comes not only in one shade

    Mislay the doubts in your mind
    And to learn how to be a true beloved friend.
    And to find their true self
    Something treasured.

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  20. A Note to Myself

    Life is the only way
    of getting one’s hand on memories,
    wishing to go back there again and,
    change what happened;

    to be a survivor,
    when the victim gets tired;

    to look around
    as water finds its level;

    to saunter through puddles,
    despite being tardy,
    delaying the inevitable discipline from up from above.

    An extraordinary sight
    the top of your head,
    as you escape
    from your rouge tinted cocoon;

    and if only once
    to hold one’s breath forever,
    to dream with the fish or fly like a Tern.

    lose your spot in the line-up,
    looking around in disbelief at your misfortune,
    never forgetting that forever we are,
    waiting to expire.

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  21. A Note to Life


    Life is the only way
    to dive off a cliff,
    hold your breath under the water,
    exhale with reprieve;

    to be a rose,
    or its thorn that pricks;

    to walk away
    than put up with drama;

    to share a moment,
    laugh out loud,
    to seek the good in every one.

    An extraordinary opening
    to reminisce the helpless days
    a broken promise
    perhaps never to be fulfilled;

    and if only once
    to go back in time,
    and undo mistakes that led friends to strangers,

    lose doubt but keep the faith;
    and to try succeeding rather than simply giving up;
    and to keep on not admitting
    our selfishness.

    - Tsering Lama

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  22. A Note to The Cup

    Life is the only way
    to get embraced by hands,
    chant your team in the rink,
    raised by cheers;

    to be a fan,
    or proud of one’s collections;

    to shout victory
    from everyone who’s not;

    to flip through records,
    argue with friends,
    to wish the best for more aggressive gangs.

    An extraordinary chance
    to remember for a moment
    a ceremony held
    with the trophy not touched;

    and if only once
    to tumble into a shrub,
    end up scarred by one bear or another,

    mislay your tickets in the drawer;
    and to follow a shot on the screen with your finger;
    and to keep on not harming
    something important.

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  23. A Note About Existence

    Life is the only way
    To lie on the grass,
    Look at the Milky Way,
    With captivated eyes,

    To be a child,
    fall into the greatest despair;

    To still rise
    beautiful from your ashes;

    To cherish the smile
    of a child,
    To exist entirely in his big eyes.

    A Mystery indeed
    to puzzle the mind
    of any man
    With a beating heart;

    And if nothing ever
    to share the deepest love,
    feel connected to the world,

    lose yourself in a kiss;
    And to know you belong to the infinite;
    And yet ask yourself “what is
    To be alive?”

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  24. A Note to Myself
    Life is the only way
    to get wet in the puddle,
    cry your grasshoppers in fall,
    ride on a rainbow;

    to be a candy,
    or savour its sweet juice;

    to tell winter
    from every time it’s not;

    to hover in a dilemma,
    puzzle about answers,
    to search the least of all possible misplay.

    An extraordinary time
    to remember for a moment
    a sick night held
    with a bowl of pomegranate seeds pressed one by one by your daughter;

    and if only once
    to stumble upon a bridge,
    end up saturated in one stream or another

    Lost your desire in the reality;
    and to follow a sound of waves with your ears;
    and to keep on thinking
    something never happens.

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